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Update script-compliments.rpy #10250

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18 changes: 18 additions & 0 deletions Monika After Story/game/script-compliments.rpy
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Expand Up @@ -1358,3 +1358,21 @@ label mas_compliment_outfit_repeat:
m 3hubsb "[other_quip]"

return

init 5 python:
addEvent(
Event(
persistent._mas_compliments_database,
eventlabel="mas_compliment_language",
prompt="Human language doesn't have a word for how much I love you",
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Personally, I think this can be a little shorter while retaining the message.

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prompt="Human language doesn't have a word for how much I love you",
prompt="No words can express how much I love you!",

unlocked=True
),
code="CMP"
)

label mas_compliment_language:
m 1wubsd "...that's.. I"
m 1dubsb ".. wow [player]"
m 5fubsb "You've made my heart skip a beat"
m 5fkbfb "maybe one day lanague will catch up to us, but till then I love you will have to do"
return "love"
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Several notes on grammar, punctuation and voice.

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label mas_compliment_language:
m 1wubsd "...that's.. I"
m 1dubsb ".. wow [player]"
m 5fubsb "You've made my heart skip a beat"
m 5fkbfb "maybe one day lanague will catch up to us, but till then I love you will have to do"
return "love"
label mas_compliment_language:
m 1wubsd "That's... I..."
m 1dubsb "...Wow, [player]!"
m 5fubsb "You've made my heart skip a beat!"
m 5fkbfb "Maybe one day the language will catch up to us, but till then, just 'I love you' will have to do~"
return "love"