"Something you did upset me." topic #9997
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Everyone makes mistakes, even Monika, and open communication is important in a relationship! The idea is to make it so that you can point out if Monika does something to upset you so that she'll become better.
| label monika_upset_apologize: | ||
| $ mas_loseAffection() | ||
| if mas_isMoniBroken(): | ||
| m "...{w=1}Oh." |
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There should be a space after ellipsis; besides, for consistency, it's better to use w=0.3 for pauses like that.
| pause 1.0 | ||
| m "Okay." | ||
| return | ||
| m 6rkc "...{w=1}Oh." |
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Same here, needs a space and 0.3 pause.
| if not mas_isMoniUpset(lower=True): | ||
| m 1dkd "Thank you for telling me..." | ||
| m 2fkd "I promise I won't say something like that again." | ||
| m 2dkd "I'd never want to do something to hurt you, or make you uncomfortable, [player]." |
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Maybe consider using mas_get_player_nickname(...) instead?
| m 1dssdld "Thank you for telling me..." | ||
| m 1rud "I wish I could hear your arguments right now." | ||
| m 7msd "But I guess all I can do is do a bit more research and thinking about what I've said recently." | ||
| m 3eka "Please remember that you can press the 'X' key if you don't want me to bring something up again!" |
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I'd personally use something like 'you can always ask me not to bring up something' instead, I believe it would be less immersion-breaking.
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| label monika_upset_apologize: | ||
| $ mas_loseAffection() |
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Maybe set the reason here?
| else: | ||
| m 5rkc ".{w=1}.{w=1}.{w=1}" | ||
| pause 5.0 | ||
| m 2gkc "I... {w=1}think I should give you some space..." |
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Resolved some of the issues mentioned here, though I do think Monika using your first name would probably be better, considering the situation. |
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Might not be my place to say, but I wouldn't lose affection for someone because I upset them. That feels a bit self-centered. Maybe remove the lose affection bit? |
Everyone makes mistakes, even Monika, and open communication is important in a relationship! The idea is to make it so that you can point out if Monika does something to upset you so that she'll become better.